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Old December 23 2011, 11:51 PM   #2
Sandoval
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Re: The Light

I've only skimmed it but constantly referring to Captain Archer as 'Jonathan' is a bit out-of-place. I think 'Archer', 'Picard', 'Sisko' works just fine without changing it for the sake of becoming overly-familiar.

You can get away with 'Travis', 'Trip' and 'Malcolm' but referring to the captain by his first name doesn't work.
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