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Old December 16 2011, 05:18 PM   #3
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Re: Voyager: An Alternate Journey 01: Time of Mystery

Unless it was beginning to collapse, but that should have been in the story. It would be easier to read if it was in past tense than present tense.

Interesting though.
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