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Old November 5 2011, 11:14 PM   #8
Seven of Five
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Re: Fist of the Four Lights

Perhaps in an alternate universe, this would be totally believable. Particularly if Picard had been held captive for a much longer period, and the experience made him more hardened. But it's very well done, regardless. I love the style you use, Kracov. Is the 'DATADATADATA...' bit an in-joke as Picard pummells Madred? Otherwise it's a bit odd.

Love it overall though.
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