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Old October 14 2011, 02:25 AM   #9
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Re: Sigils and Unions/SigCat: The Spark in Yartek's Eye

A most fascinating work, Nerys.

I don't want to repeat what everyone else has already said, so--I'll focus on another element:

You wonderfully portray, in vivid detail, the creative mind at work. The writing process, via "stream of consciousness". They way the couple bounce ideas off each other is superb, and very realistic and believable.

Well done.
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