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Old August 22 2011, 01:33 PM   #8
CeJay
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Re: Star Trek: Lemuria 13

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This is the first work by you I've read - your style is fairly entertaining - a little tongue in cheek. I hope to see more.
Not just a little tongue in cheek.

I did enjoy this quite a bit. You had some issues with the tenses, and your runabout changed suddenly from Mississippi to Missouri. Not sure if that was part of the joke or not.
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