Admiral Shran wrote:
I just finished Chapter 3. Excellent work so far. The dialogue is what really catches my attention. Too often I find that the fiction I read gets overly bogged down in the descriptions - but not here. Without good conversation, all the description in the world isn't worth much. It almost reads like a script for a stage play with scene descriptions (a la Arthur Miller's The Crucible), which is very nice.
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Thanks,
Shran!
(When you're done with this one--I think you'd like reading up on my many Tales Of Ezri Dax--provided, of course, you don't mind the spoler of her current position in the novels. There are a couple of DS9 tales with her, which don't have any spoilers, really.... I think you'd like them.
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I'm not sure if Holland is a double agent for the Orions or not yet.
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Wow. As you no doubt have read, you're not the only reader who's thought that....
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A Section 31 operative? Maybe. Can't wait to read more tomorrow.
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Looking forward to it!
Rush Limborg wrote:
Bashir walked off, shaking his head with a silent chuckle as the woman carried on in her duties. I actually enjoyed that…. I wonder—was this how Jadzia felt, all those times with me?
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I'm sure she did. For proof look no further than when Bashir first meets Leeta.
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Yep. And of course that scene in "The Alternate", when she deliberately gives him the wrong idea, and then crushes it, much like Julian does, here. When she leaves the Infirmary in that ep, he snickers to himself in bitter amusement, and mutters, "She enjoys it. Somehow...she takes a perverse
pleasure in it...."