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Old August 18 2011, 06:06 AM   #111
Admiral Shran
Location: In the Before Time - the Long, Long Ago
Re: Star Trek: From Risa With Love--An Adventure Of Dr. Julian Bashir

I just finished Chapter 3. Excellent work so far. The dialogue is what really catches my attention. Too often I find that the fiction I read gets overly bogged down in the descriptions - but not here. Without good conversation, all the description in the world isn't worth much. It almost reads like a script for a stage play with scene descriptions (a la Arthur Miller's The Crucible), which is very nice.

I'm not sure if Holland is a double agent for the Orions or not yet. A Section 31 operative? Maybe. Can't wait to read more tomorrow.

Rush Limborg wrote: View Post
Bashir walked off, shaking his head with a silent chuckle as the woman carried on in her duties. I actually enjoyed that…. I wonder—was this how Jadzia felt, all those times with me?
I'm sure she did. For proof look no further than when Bashir first meets Leeta.
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