I thought I had an original idea here. That's why I hate mucking about with Trek these days, the mine has been heavily played out. I'm not gonna walk down a path already trodden, I'd rather go where no man has gone before.
Thanks for the contributions, guys. It made for a diverting ... evening. Now I think I'm going to wander off and find my scotch.
No, it looks good. Your design has a different proportionality to it.
I really like how the neck appears to run through the bottom of the secondary hull to connect with the ring.
This could be a very graceful design.