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TNG: Indistinguishable From Magic by McIntee Review Thread (Spoilers)
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Re: Star Trek: TNG: Indistinguishable From Magic Review Thread
Lonemagpie wrote:
The part was meant to be replaced by just a Romulan Admiral
I did find one other error in chapter 19.
When Bok first woke, his head was filled with...including Rasmussen. The name Rasmussen as the end of that paragraph should be Ras-mew-son as it's Bok's thoughts.
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