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Old April 16 2011, 09:22 AM   #19
david lowbridge
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Re: Star Trek: Nightingale

Gibraltar wrote: View Post
Feedback on Chapter 4:

Wilcox handled Torlik well, given the man’s attitude. Only time will tell if Torlik is willing to allow himself a fresh start aboard Nightingale. The fresh-faced young lieutenant will be a challenge, though in reality she already has more experience than Harry Kim did when he reported aboard Voyager as Chief of Operations.

The ship is understaffed with a largely inexperienced crew under a new captain… I can only imagine the challenges that lay ahead!
Thanks for the feedback as always...it certainly is a tough situation for the new Captain... but it wouldn't be a good story if there weren't some problems.
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