[Lonemagpie]

shanejayell wrote:

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All right, finished it today.

Good book, though I was a little disappointed that Geordi pretty much ends up right back where he started. Yes, he's a 'captain' and he has Leah, but I'd wish that he had his own ship and crew! Captain La Forge of the SCE! ^__^

The original intent, of course, was that it would be two books, so there'd have been a gap into which you could slot such adventures in between them. Obviously that was lost when it became one book, but that's why there's a gap of a couple of months between parts one and two...

I liked the end of Scotty's story, too. He MIGHT make it, he might not, but either way was a grand send off.

That was the intent, all the way!

I voted 'Above Average' and it nearly made it to Outstanding! Good job!

Ta!