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Old March 30 2011, 10:43 AM   #74
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Re: Star Trek: TNG: Indistinguishable From Magic Review Thread

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I blasted through this in one day. Mostly good stuff, although there were a couple of points that didn't quite resonate well with me.

I have a few questions. Please feel free to answer or not; it's your little corner of the universe and I don't want to poke and prod where I'm not welcome.



Nog is clearly on top, yeah. That dialogue just sort of came out while I was writing the scene, and it felt kind of natural for both characters.

Also...
Not specifically - I just didn't want a reset-button for him. (See Shanjayell's post!) So it's left there if anyone wants to make use of it in future.
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