STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES
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March 30 2011, 03:44 AM
Re: STAR TREK: RAVENLIN: THE DIEING SHORES
You don't suck. You're actually a decent writer, but isn't
? Instead of "acid smoke" try "acrid smoke". I've written a few stories on AdAstra and I'd love to see your's there, too.
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