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Old February 19 2011, 11:36 AM   #12
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Re: February Challenge -- "Indestructible"

Thats a great story! Very believable. I felt sorry for both of them, but especially his wife. That must have been such a hard time for her. I am glad her love for him was strong enough and also that he apolozised in the end. However what makes the story really sad is, the knowing that he will not see his daughter grow up and living a long life with his wife. That is so sad. All the fear that he might be killed... and in the end he is the one who lives on without them.

... Stay clear! Its the singing of things Im longing to hear. You touch them and stiff and silent they turn. Youre killing the things for whose singing I yearn!

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