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Old February 10 2011, 09:34 PM   #6
TheLoneRedshirt
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Re: February Challenge -- "Indestructible"

Superb story! I think you captured the essence of true love - it's more than warm-fuzzy feelings and romance. Sometimes it is a daily choice to persevere even under the harshest of circumstances.

I hope Arenn realizes how blessed he is. Hopefully he will return to Asra in one piece.

Very well written story - this one will be hard to beat!
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