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Old November 13 2010, 07:40 AM   #5
Kaziarl
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Re: November Challenge--"Serenity Prayer", A Tale of Captain Ezri Dax

Very well done, I liked it.

Now, I'm not to sure what happened between them as I haven't had the chance to read the books. Too poor to get them. But it certainly seems that there is a canyon between Ezri and Julian now. And I know from personal experience how hard it can be to loose a friend over that, and how you can begin to doubt yourself. I'd say you captured that feeling very nicely.
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