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Old September 29 2010, 09:41 AM   #185
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Re: Star Trek: Restoration - Onyx

kes7 wrote: View Post
Oh, no! Jasto, watch out!

Looks like Keene is staying on top of things, more or less. In the heat of battle, he's watching out for number one. I wonder what's going on with the meld ... whether it's proceeding more or less normally and Malok is just very unfamiliar with it, or whether there's a problem. Been a while since we visited this scene.

Keep the scenes coming!
Yeah, Jasto is in trouble. Keene has a very keen eye for an opportunity, and this one is too good to pass up.

No, there is definitely something wrong with the meld. This is not proceeding normally, and considering who Jasto and Q'sar are pursuing...

More coming tonight!

Gul Re'jal wrote: View Post
I like the "bits" approach, helps me to stay in the "story mood"

kes7 wrote: View Post
Oh, no! Jasto, watch out!
Ditto! Jasto, watch out!
Thanks for the vote of confidence, Gul Re'jal. I'm hoping to have something posted at least three times a week - I really need to get this volume of the story finished before the beginning of November!!!

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