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Old September 16 2010, 06:08 AM   #130
Gul Re'jal
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Re: Star Trek: Shaping a Cardassian

I thank you!


Today, on my ride to work by a bus, I realised I created a giant plot hole, a plot abyss. I don't know if no one noticed, or everyone was so polite not to mention it, but it occurred to be easily fixed. With one word!

You just need to replace the first word of the chapter "A good engineer's worth his weight in latinum": instead of "Glinn" it should be "Gil". Taa-daa!

It's terrible when your characters live their own lives, and you forget details and then continue writing something incoherent
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