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Old August 26 2010, 03:20 PM   #24
Lindley
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Re: Do ships in the Farscape universe have FTL?

The Mirrorball Man wrote: View Post
JonathonWally wrote: View Post
"Captain: we're under attack, fire back, hurt them
Some guy: their shields are up
Captain: improvise
Some guy: I could try manually teching the tech right after I tech the tech
Captain: less talking, more doing"
I think we should strip it down and keep only the narrative beats:
CAPTAIN: Exposition.
SOME GUY: Problem!
CAPTAIN: Resolution!
SOME GUY: Conflict.
CAPTAIN: Emotional appeal.
SOME GUY: Action.
Courtesy of bash.org....
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<Donut[AFK]> ADDON RIPOSTE
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