"Captain: we're under attack, fire back, hurt them
Some guy: their shields are up
Some guy: I could try manually teching the tech right after I tech the tech
Captain: less talking, more doing"
I think we should strip it down and keep only the narrative beats:
SOME GUY: Problem!
SOME GUY: Conflict.
CAPTAIN: Emotional appeal.
SOME GUY: Action.