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Old August 26 2010, 02:49 PM   #22
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Re: Do ships in the Farscape universe have FTL?

JonathonWally wrote: View Post
"Captain: we're under attack, fire back, hurt them
Some guy: their shields are up
Captain: improvise
Some guy: I could try manually teching the tech right after I tech the tech
Captain: less talking, more doing"
I think we should strip it down and keep only the narrative beats:
CAPTAIN: Exposition.
SOME GUY: Problem!
CAPTAIN: Resolution!
SOME GUY: Conflict.
CAPTAIN: Emotional appeal.
SOME GUY: Action.
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