There are two placed you may find awkward. I wasn't sure if I should use Past Perfect for whole paragraph, or Past Simple. My native language has three tenses (present, future and past), so I don't have an instinct to use all those different past tenses correctly.
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In a Cardassian
library or in a Cardassian
gallery?
"Reagan, it appears, is really only an ardent unionist if the unions in question are in Poland" - Stephen King,
Skeleton Crew