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Old August 5 2010, 12:45 AM   #8
TheLoneRedshirt
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Re: Sigils and Unions: Catacombs of Oralius--"A Door to the Soul"

As usual, you bring a strong, emotional punch to your writing. There's a depth to your characters that is captivating - beyond personality or physical attributes. You manage to capture and portray the spiritual side of these familiar/strange characters without turning them into caricatures. A risky endeavor, but you do it very well.

Poignant and well-written. You leave the reader feeling hopeful but unsure . . . a great way to keep us engaged.

Very nice.
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