Count Zero wrote:
Superbly written, as always. What a heart-wrenching scene on the stairs. I hope you'll continue with the regular updates because I can't wait to find out how this story will continue.
Don't worry, there will be regular updates. I haven't started work on the new chapter yet - busy working on my trek fan fic, but I will hopefully get round to at least a first draft by this weekend (probably a Leia chapter)
That scene on the stairs was difficult to write - I wanted to balance out the emotion of the scene without it going into emo territory. Glad that it worked for you.
Thanks for the comment!