Nerys Ghemor wrote:
Man, this is like Star Wars meets nuBsG--nothing can go right for these characters! (Of course, your characters are still more likeable than the nuBsG ones.
The dialogue at the end definitely got the simplistic feel we tend to get in the climactic scenes of one of the actual Star Wars movies.
Glad to know that you find my characters more likeable than the nuBSG ones. I don't mind them myself, but I see what you mean.
As for the dialogue - is the simplistic feel a good thing or a bad one? Not quite clear from the comment.
Thanks for the comment, hope you're still enjoying this story.