I too have unconventional ideas about commas. That is to say, I have no real idea about when/where/how/why to use them. I just do.
I am a little worried O'Connor is not quite up to what is in store for her. I know Starfleet is made of sterner stuff than we ususally see but things are getting soooo interesting!
And Beckely. What mischief is he causing? He is in the back of my mind like that iron/stove/coffee maker you forgot to turn off before you left the house. I do hope he will complicate things horribly!
Another wonderful chapter! Thank you!