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Old July 14 2010, 01:45 PM   #176
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Re: SW AU - A Glimmer of Hope

Another excellent chapter. Good to see this back!

One very minor quibble, that only a pedant like me would pick up on. This chapter is written from Anakin's point of view, we experience things from his perspective. But the name Lando crops up in the narrative a couple of times before the smuggler introduces himself. Something Anakin shouldn't have known.

That aside, well written and entertaining. I'm looking forward to more!
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