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Old June 30 2010, 05:56 AM   #44
RobertScorpio
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Re: Star Trek: Voyager - Dark Realm

i just finished ON THE LOWER DECKS.

And yes, in honor of that great TNG episode, you're "lower deck" segment was very well done. You really have the dialog element down here, and I really liked how they seemed like normal people. Harry has never been one of my favorite characters, but I like him here...

And the dialog during the match was well done as well. I liked how all the characters were treated with a three-dimensional element. In my own writing I struggle there, but you have it down real good here...

Rob
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