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Old May 31 2010, 07:05 PM   #95
Greg Cox
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Re: Seven Deadly Sins Discuss/ Grade

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Sloth: the Pakled - "Work Is Hard"

Good lighthearted story. It is smart. Like a good late TNG episode. Not like a bad early TNG episode. It makes the idea from the episode go, removes stupid parts, explains it the smart way. The Pakled are not stupid, the Pakled are not all the same. Geordie learns better, Enterprise people had prejudice, Geordie make friends with the Pakled. But the Pakled show the sin of being lazy, the story has a point.

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It is funny review. Author is happy. He is glad the story made you laugh. Ha-ha!

I take a nap now . . .
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