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Old May 24 2010, 03:35 PM   #5
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Re: May Challenge--The Sisterhood

I enjoyed your take on the challenge! There seems to be a common theme through (most) of the challenge stories where the Enterprise(s) are less than enamored by their crews.

To echo mari, I particularly liked how you brought out Trager's disgust that Starfleet would send children out on a vessel likely to engage in battle. That's an interesting (and appropriate) twist on the usual moral posturing of the Federation. I always thought that the policy of families on Starfleet vessels was either incredibly naiive or outright arrogant. Enterprise seems to share this sentiment when she describes the Federation as a place with a tenuous grasp of reality. Sobering, but sadly accurate.
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