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Old April 8 2010, 03:26 PM   #9
RobertScorpio
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Location: San Diego
Re: Chiron Intergalaxy Corp.

I think this is one of the most unique ideas for a story, and trust me; I know.

This is an interesting read, and had me scratching my head the entire time. If I were you I would keep it as aloof as you are and avoid the standard 'story telling' constructs.

Rob
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