Garm Bel Iblis wrote:
ok i started this last night.... i dunno...i'm only a few dozen pages in, it just seems irritating when such a peacenik writes a war story...Stiles is all "Boo yah, I"m a marine!" I've never met a cocky soldier like that, i dunno.
Kind of like Quartrich in Avatar, is what you're describing?
Indeed, it's very irritating when people write military types as nothing but caricatures. When you've known the real deal, it rings hollow.