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Old January 28 2010, 07:21 PM   #16
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Re: Embers of the Fire - ST: Gibraltar

And into the fire they head!

Once again, your painting of the scenes in words works wonders. This is the kind of writing that draws me into a story. I need to believe in more than just the characters when I 'escape' for an hour or two and this shows exactly how it's done!

More nice character development as well. Conflicts and combines abound here!
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