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Old January 11 2010, 01:10 AM   #58
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Re: Star Trek: Restoration - Onyx

Oh, how I love Kalara more every time we see her! Great interaction here between her and her mother. I feel like I learned a lot about her, and what's going on with the Klingons. And my mouth dropped open at Elyra's "you who would pollute our house with the blood of aliens" line. Oh, she did not go there! She did go there! I want to see Damien do something sufficiently bad-ass to put Elyra in her place, now! And Kalara growling over the comment was just great. Their whole exchange was great, in fact. Tons of quality drama there, enough for its own book, it sounds like!

And Ianto wants to be a hologram ... this could be cool. I loved this:

"He seems to be malfunctioning," Kane said drily.

"Actually, they were all like this," Ianto responded.

"No wonder they were discontinued," Kalara said.
I love the EMH, but this is such a classic first impression.

I also liked Kalara's continuing to be unnerved by Kane and the rest of the Borg. Although, Kane said more here than I'm used to seeing him say, which was interesting. I'm glad they separated Kane and Ianto successfully. And aw, look, Kane's blushing. Maybe he's not totally creepy.

Excellent work, Joel! Don't keep us waiting too long for the next, please!
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