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Old January 5 2010, 03:33 PM   #48
CaptainSarine
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Re: Star Trek: Restoration - Onyx

kes

Are you doubting my unworthiness?!! Shame on you!

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I have to admit, I was worried about this chapter, and went through a dozen different versions - some where I showed the various scenes I discuss here and some without. At the end of the day, I decided it was enough to have Astrid think about it.

As for Haebron and Jasto - yeah they're both pretty screwed up. And they're about to get even more screwed up as this story continues.

Gibraltar

I was really worried about your comment where you mention the plots within schemes within machinations making your head spin... until you got to the end and said that I was keeping a tight rein! Phew!

I have to admit I was worried about how complex this story is getting. The only thing I am happy about is that as you've said, by the end of this Volume, a lot of these threads will have been guided towards an end.

Thanks for the welcome back!

Joel
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