Inspired by this thread:
It was proposed that maybe the late 23th (and early 24th) century uniforms -that were radical departure from any Star Fleet uniform before or after this era- actually were more formal class-A uniforms, and there existed a less militaristic looking class-B variant. So here is my suggestion for class-B officer's uniform:
I am not actually sure if I like them myself, anyhow, here they are.
(Based on uniform templates originally published in Star Trek: the Magazine.
Nice... I like the idea a lot, and toyed with it myself in some of my fan fics.
Have you thought about keeping the tan yoke from the jumpsuit uniform? Star fleet has a history of making two piece uniforms based off of their jumpsuit uniforms, so when I needed a "class B" uniform that was the direction I went.