View Single Post
Old November 26 2009, 03:38 PM   #34
Rush Limborg
Vice Admiral
Rush Limborg's Avatar
Location: The EIB Network
Re: Star Trek: A Rendezvous With Destiny--A Tale of Captain Ezri Dax

The Badger wrote: View Post
Another couple of well written scenes. I did groan slightly at the old 'you are the only ship in the sector' trope, as it is such a hackneyed plot device, but given the amount of times it's been used in Trek itself I'll let you off this time!
I know. I kinda flinched when I wrote it, too.

But...for this tale, I relied heavily on Star Charts, and I knew I had to pick a location close enough to Starbase 24 (which I also discovered, via the charts, to be the most logical place to pick up Spock) to believably use that device--to keep the groan as slight as possble.

Regulus fit the bill...I guess.

The interaction between Ezri and Spock remains utterly convincing. Somehow, I think I know who will be accompanying Spock...
(snicker) Yuppers.
"The saying implies but does not name the effective agency of its supposed utopia.... 'Needs and abilities' are, of course, subjective. So the operative statement may be reduced to 'the State shall take, the State shall give'."
--David Mamet
Rush Limborg is offline   Reply With Quote