Sephiroth wrote:

Greg Cox wrote:

Sephiroth wrote:

just finished it, it was pretty good,two different storylines that come together pretty well,
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Thanks! Glad you liked it.
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yeah, I like that you don't shy from the bleakness and death that would arise from the situation, each machine destroyed came at a price
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You should have seen the first draft! I actually had to tone down the death and carnage . . . .