I think I may have been hampered in getting the full significance of the story by an overall lack of familiarity with Enterprise
, but I found it a very entertaining read nonetheless. The pacing was great. As Debure discovered more and more, I felt as though I was watching a mystery unfold. The arrest at the end took me by surprise, and I found myself sympathetic to the plights of both men who had been placed in difficult situations by things beyond their control. Well done on working together!