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Old October 27 2009, 06:10 PM   #155
Duncan MacLeod
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Re: Starship Enterprise "Broken Bow" (Alternate version)

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Another good installment, well worth the wait. I liked the interaction with the Tellarites and the ribbing of Reed. Also your description of Yridians was right on too. When I read that I thought to myself, sounds like the Yridians are involved, and sure enough thats what the aliens were.
They have no thumbs, which pretty much makes everything in this chapter utter bullshit. Am I the only one who sees this?

Apparently, yes. Quite nasty about it too. Every writer welcomes a valid critique. But in the future please try to make it constructive, rather than simply venting your spleen.
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