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Old October 16 2009, 10:08 AM   #41
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Re: Star Trek : Angel

Commentary on Chapter 13

Your descriptions of the destruction and disorder on Zethander following the asteroid strikes, tsunami, and the crash of pieces of the Borg cube are harrowing in their detail. We get terrific glimpses at the first responders from the colony doing their best to pick up the pieces as Starfleet coordinates efforts from orbit.

The levity between Fishlock and Captain Johnson was a nice break from the misery planet-side, and gives the reader an nice window onto how Dan conducts himself with friends other than Kat.

Gah! An untimely end for Rousseau, and I liked the guy, too! This is getting grimmer and grimmer… just the way I like it.
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