Commentary on Chapter 4
As Iíve not read your Academy series Iím not familiar with your cadet characters, but from what little Iíve read of them theyíre well-drawn and engaging.
The doctorís finally onboard, and with only a slight layover to fix the fighter-launch problem, Angelís
nearly ready for open space.
Again, wonderful crew interactions from a variety of species assigned to the ship. Youíve got a knack for establishing characters from the word Ďgo.í