First, they do allow OT art posts in the Trek Art forum (confusion over which resulted in a QS&F thread), and
Second, who's Baxter again?
It's a good job, though, for someone who hasn't drawn in a long time, especially since childhood. If you're serious about this, I'd suggest investing in a figure or life drawing course to help get down the basics. IIRC, the last time this subject came up, one of us mentioned "Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain," which I think
you bought? Have you been working through their exercises?