Deranged Nasat wrote:
Nice start, Rush
. I think you're doing fine with a character-oriented story!
I agree with Nerys
that you present Bashir and Ezri as a convincing couple; the trust and general comfort they show around one another is indeed evident. I find the conversation convincing, too.
The link between Bashir and Tarses-- their respective career-threatening cover-ups --is also certainly worthy of exploration.
I just read this today, and I agree. I can't wait to see where you take this...keep going..or is it..ditto!