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Old September 8 2009, 08:40 PM   #6
DavidFalkayn
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Re: Star Trek: Deep Space Nine--The Cleanest Food To Find

Now that things are settling down and I can finally get to read and comment on all these fine stories, I'm glad that I read this. You do an excellent job here conveying the relationship of these canon characters. I could very easily imagine their dialogue sounding like this in the series. I also like how you've brought Tarses in--a haunted individual--as are both Bashir and Dax. Between the two of them, I have a feeling that they'll get Tarses back on his feet again.

Very nicely done.
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