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Old September 8 2009, 08:28 PM   #5
Deranged Nasat
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Re: Star Trek: Deep Space Nine--The Cleanest Food To Find

Nice start, Rush. I think you're doing fine with a character-oriented story! I agree with Nerys that you present Bashir and Ezri as a convincing couple; the trust and general comfort they show around one another is indeed evident. I find the conversation convincing, too.

The link between Bashir and Tarses-- their respective career-threatening cover-ups --is also certainly worthy of exploration.
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