I am sooooooo behind at the moment, so I can't give this the attention it deserves, Anwar
, but I like a lot of what you have here. Particularly interesting is your flashback setup...I'm not sure I can imagine it completely, but I am attracted to the idea.
And as you know, I really like the idea of making the Federation-Maquis split last longer. Quite a bit
I'll try to be more thorough in the next couple of days, but I didn't want you to think I wasn't paying attention.