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Old August 8 2009, 11:41 PM   #46
Daneel
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Re: TOS five word thingy!!!

"Supposed?" Kirk asked. "I don't

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Of course. (But if you're going to start with a capital after the quote mark, you will need a period -- not a comma -- beforehand. )
Right you are. Fixed. I guess I got mixed up when I decided to have Kirk continue speaking, but with a new sentence. Thanks for being my punctuation-checker!

As for the ellipses, yeah, I can see how those might be appropriate, but I think they might just confuse matters further. I'll just stick with quotation marks myself, and to each their own.
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