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Old August 1 2009, 12:35 AM   #6
kes7
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Re: July Challenge Entry - 'Rain'

I liked the story, but like Brother Benny, I was a little lost. Your explanation clears things up some. Overall, I felt this was very well-written but felt incomplete -- like a snippet of a larger story, without context. But you painted a very good picture of a single moment -- an enjoyable read!
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