I too liked this for the fascinating crew dynamics.
An original Trek story stands or falls on the strength of the characters and based on that your off to a great start.
So true..and I agree. This story is off to a promising start. I also like how Janeway seems to show up alot in these fan fics, mine as well. She is an interesting character who deserved better writing than what she got...
Great start Kes..keep it coming.