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Old July 14 2009, 01:07 PM   #16
Deranged Nasat
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Re: July Challenge Entry--A Stone's Throw Away

That was wonderful. I'm very moved, and I'd like to say I think you are a great story-teller. This was to a standard most definitely worthy of an actual published author. There's nothing more important to me than the bond between mutually loving parents and children, which I consider sacred, and to me you really captured that.
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